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 In between dreams
I have never been able to describe you and feel satisfied...
you're in my mind all the time...but you're so subtle N you're so quiet..
you're like the horizons that are so vague..yet so beautiful...
and when it comes to describing how lovely you seem...
i fear i might miss out somethings owing to my limited vocabulary
and the existance of a middle class universe in my head...
which won't be fair on your part....so tonight I decided to paint you...
i'll paint you with some blurbs...and i'll paint you with my words....
I will paint you even though you're a million miles away...
or may be somewhere on the road to this distant place..
Away from all the regular trash that often comes my way...
I never expected you to be perfect...for i know it's an impossible thing
but you somehow do it...yes..and i can strongly feel it...
Though i have little clues about how you might look...
but trust me i have long been watching you through your words...
you're pretty and when i paint you..i'll make you have shape and grace...
i'll make you moody..i'll make you happy..i'll make u silly..
I'll give you a glowing face and a pretty pair of eyes....
I'll paint you lovely hands to hold mine with...
I'll paint you the sweetest lips..just like honey
and the softest cheeks...like my chubby cousin..
told ya...im gonna paint you a bit silly..
i keep you in my head everywhere i go..i paint you every now and then..
the other day i sat on a train..and opposite me..I saw a dreamy face...
it took a minute to realize..i was staring at a glass reflection of me..
such are your thoughts..they send me to a world so dreamy..
where only you and i belong...though i have my fantasies..
but i'll paint you decent, pretty and divine just like you seem..
Life is too short to walk around shops buying shoes
so i'll paint you an ever lasting pair of Jimmy Choo's..
I'll paint you a perfect store..where you're in and out in five minutes..
so i get to have most of your time even when u do every thing...
I'll paint you a book shop..a place where no cheap magazines are bought..
a place..where only pretty stories and lovely things are sold..
I'll paint you a coffee shop that'll never close..we'll sit there for hours..
I will also paint you friends that won't b.i.t.c.h behind your back
or make you pay for the drinks that they've had...creatures of rare kind..
Although i'm no Edward Cullen to read people's mind..but i know
being human..the men around you might desire you with filthy intentions..
So i shall paint you a million miles away from these shallow men i see everyday..
I'll paint you a pretty park where summer does last all through the year...
where I can caress your face and run my fingers through your hair....
And give you that feeling that you'll hope will never leave you...
I will paint you a place you'd love and call your own...that'll be our home
Placed on an island with an equilibrium of sunshine and moonlight..
this place will be blessed with beauty like paris or rome..
it'll make u smile even when im gone or when life makes u feel alone..
a place that will give you peace but will also make you miss me...
for it's a tad cold world out there N only I can give u the love and warmth u need
when we're together..i'll hold you real close to me...
we will talk about this..that..anything..and just everything..
you will lay on my chest and see the night become a day...
and we will paint another lovely memory in our own way...
I will paint you a really wonderful man..the one you dream of..
quite possibly an improved version of me...the one who'll understand you..
the one who'd love you unconditionally and tell you how he feels the same..
I'll also give you an ability to not like me at times when im inappropriate..
You wouldn't neccassarily have to like the things i write N the songs i sing...
I'll also paint you with this unique knowledge....
that'll help you keep away from depression and heartbreaks...
But with the limited ability I have...i doubt if i can do so..
and considering all that i've been through and seen in life....
it wouldn't be possible for me to paint you a heart that won't be broken....
to paint you eyes that won't cry rivers from time to time...
you're a woman and im a man...things needn't always rhyme..
but i'll paint you enough love to get you through the hard times..
I'll paint you very feminine just as you seem..
men all around will follow you with their gaze..
every building site around you will come to life and whistle with excitement
your scent will even make the walls sing in chorus..
your presence will make a million stars shoot at once....
your smile will make even the brightest of things look dull..
you will brighten up the faded streets of my loveless city..
you'd be my saviour and bring a fresh breath of air to the
abondoned class of lovers and roimantics that i belong to..
It would be very selfish of me if i paint you anywhere near me...
because that wouldn't be anywhere close to what real life is..
you'd be prettier than anything that ever existed or survived..
How i'd love to paint you a story with me as ur prince charming...
I will paint you a colorful place like no other.....
blueberry skies with chocolate clouds that'll represent our dreams...
I will paint you a brilliant day and a mind blowing night...
i will spend one full day doing nothing but staring at you..
and that would be enough for me...knowing that i have known you..
and been in your presence for 24 hours...will keep me happy
and smiling for the rest of my life...
I will paint you a christmas that I have always dreamed of......
I will paint you a fancy tree with gifts that sit on the bottom...
I'll also paint you some excited babies waiting to spoil their gifts..
I'll paint them pretty and cute like you...i'll paint them in such a way...
that they would never cry or wake you up in the middle of a night..
they'd be gifted with a natural knowlegde of changing their own diapers
and finding milk without disturbing you when you're asleep...
well...if that doesn't happen.....then i can always do that for them..hehe
I will paint a beaming christams smile on your sparkling face...
that'll free your father from any doubts of you being unhappy with me..
I'll capture your lovely smile in my memory...for that'll help me...
through the lonely and desolate nights that may blight my life...
if this very dream...if this very imagination...doesn't come true...
I will mostly paint you not because i know i have the required vision...
but because i know...that my my life would be prettier and worth living...
if you are by my side...or anywhere near me...
i might sound selfish there...but you are the every reason....i still exist..
you're the cause...you're the target...you're the inspiration..
you're all that i write for....and you're all that makes me write..
you're the reason i sing...you're the reason i dream..
Im well aware of the depressing possibilites and cynical nature of life..
thus, i know that this dream of mine...may or may not come true...
but woman you know what...i'll always be happy for atleast..
i got a chance to paint you...




Thanks to all the wonderful people around for being an inspiration of sorts.
I reckon, this write might also serve as a sequel to one of my previous write
"working class romeo" ( which was indeed a  sequel to the write "woman" )

Anyways..to go with this blog..i recorded an acoustic version "yellow" by coldplay
If possible please give it a complete listen..i record songs to be heard...

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Once again thank you for for reading me...

and making my alien scribbles feel appriciated....

cheers




    Posted by isuckedthemoon on 2009-08-04 13:03:51 | Rating: | Views: 412
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This was beautiful to read (((MoOn))) Love "yellow" as well :)
Posted by  purpleflowersbyth...  on 2009-08-04 13:11:51 
  
thank you purps :-)

Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:52:05 
  
This was beautiful. She's lucky to have someone think of her like you do.
Posted by  Whitters  on 2009-08-04 13:20:18 
  
i think like that for almost every woman..hehe

thank you for reading and listening to me once again!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:52:59 
  
Wonderful use of words and feelings all expressing desires from the heart. The music was great too. Anytime Moonie.
Posted by  Moxi  on 2009-08-04 13:34:37 
  
thank you moxi :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:58:26 
  
~ Moonie...wow you just start and you flow and flow with words and feelings you draw images in my head...so beautiful and then i listen to your voice and it adds the tingle to my experience...you have incredible talents...im lucky to have you around if simply even just for these experiences ~ :)
Posted by  frenchkiss  on 2009-08-04 14:04:38 
  
aww frenchie you're sweet as ever! mwah
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:55:13 
  
oh Moonie you get me every time. where's your paint? xxo
Posted by  Azalia  on 2009-08-04 14:32:29 
  
ooohh..let's do it again...
let's have u in the rose from titanic pose..
and i'll paint you...hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:59:31 
  
You've done it this time Moonie... I fear for your safety. They will come in droves, they will climb mountains, they will trample over others just to get a glimpse of the most romantic man ever! What a loving piece for your lady.
Posted by  greunie  on 2009-08-04 17:32:57 
  
hehe..greunie makes me blush..hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:01:47 
  
beautiful words and a beautiful voice.. perfect x
Posted by  missmarie  on 2009-08-04 20:09:03 
  
thank you Missmarie! im glad you've read me timely :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:03:09 
  
I went to Imeem to listen to the full song and it says that you haven't approved full length listens so can only hear the thirty second sample
I did try xx
Posted by  missmarie  on 2009-08-04 20:12:49 
  
oh..i'll go and fix that thing..i had no clues that it wouldn't allow people...
i'll do something about it right away! cheers
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:04:46 
  
Wow..beautiful..everytime I read another blog of yours, they seem to be getting better and better. This one made my heart skip a few beats :)Who cares about shoes or anything else really, when you can paint a picture like this.. I hope she is worth all your love and beautiful heart :)


Ang
Posted by  Angie_vV  on 2009-08-04 21:56:36 
  
angie i dunno about her...but to me...
impressing you is good enough...
so are you still avaialable?

hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:06:01 
  
I might be..but Im afraid I would get lost in the queue, I have no patience hehe :P
Posted by  Angie_vV  on 2009-08-08 22:02:00 
  
don't worry...no que's for VIP's....

hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-12 10:58:37 
  
This is beautiful, the picture you painted. N is lucky to have you. Your song was beautiful as well, Yellow is a wonderful song :)
Posted by  Night_Dreamer  on 2009-08-04 22:23:00 
  
Yes it is indeed a lovely song..
Im glad you too time to read and listen to me :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:07:23 
  
You are so talented...so romantic...such a perfect Romeo...You've got the whole crowd of us swooning! And what a lovely rendition of Yellow (one of my favorites). It's a perfect match for your voice.
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-08-05 00:36:39 
  
thank you mam! im just glad i have you reading me!

PS: as for the song..i decided this one...after ur blog with the song human...just to slightly show off the falsetto skills..like the guy from civil twilight..hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 00:45:32 
  
You know these words remind me of when I was alone and searching for my true love. I wanted to open the gift and peak to see what he would look like before the time was due. That is what your posts takes me back to. Your emotion is felt by me and reminds me that most humans think alike:) hugs xx
Posted by  michelle8angels  on 2009-08-05 00:56:15 
  
that's very well said...Lana i find myself lucky..
that you're able to relate with my words and thoughts..
nothing like it!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 01:09:09 
  
great post - Puck
Posted by  puck  on 2009-08-05 07:34:29 
  
Thanks puck!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 14:00:14 
  
So beautiful, I love this one. You do have a way with words that just takes the reader away and doesn't ever want to stop reading. (o: What a lucky woman!!
Posted by  Jessika515  on 2009-08-05 10:25:02 
  
thank you Jessika!

Im glad you liked it!

keep smiling

Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-05 14:01:09 
  
you can move to Miami to be closer to me, sweetheart. It's not a problem :)

lol kidding! Very nice, as always
Take care!!!!!
Posted by  chelle33  on 2009-08-05 18:35:19 
  
actually..i plan to do so...(hehe)

PS: thank you for reading me again!

Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-06 00:47:49 
  
Well Bob...

theres something about the way you write, and the way you respond to the compliments people leave you...

I cant quite put my finger on it but theres something people recognize as comfortable and enjoyable... :)

great work as per usual...but these days it goes without saying :D

x
Posted by  Rachel_Anthea  on 2009-08-06 07:07:32 
  
thank you mam

always a pleasure knowing you read me..

i guess now i have atleast one reason to feel lucky..

PS: hehe....hey bob sounds so old and silly!


Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-06 07:11:57 
  
Wow, so much thought went into that... so much detail. Too much to believe in, really, and I guess that is what makes it an enjoyable read.
Posted by  inthesummertime  on 2009-08-07 01:20:43 
  
you've surely read it well!

im glad you liked it

thank you once again
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-07 01:57:27 
  
Beautiful! And you know a lot of beautiful words for description. Excellent! b
Posted by  shaina0422  on 2009-08-07 11:56:00 
  
Thank you shaina :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-08 03:02:41 
  
What a lovely song! you write beautifully, as usual:)
Posted by  pianogirl  on 2009-08-10 14:19:31 
  
thank you Viktoria!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-12 10:59:28 
  
This is really outstanding dearest Moon. All of the imagery you use is just so spot on, so perfectly beautiful.. Really, really well done love. :)
Posted by  Northernskygal  on 2009-08-16 01:22:55 
  
thank you my northern sky girl..im glad you took time to read it!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-16 04:19:12 
  
"When the whole world fits inside your arms, you don't really need to pay attention to the alarm."

For some strange reason this quote came to mind. ;-)
Posted by  Angie_vV  on 2009-08-16 09:16:26 
  
Right...now im trying hard to decode your message!

PS: hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-16 11:16:53 
  
You%u2019re like the contradiction I always tried to avoid, but can't help, and want to hold close to me and never let go...

Pure art, i love it!
Posted by  ChasingDreams  on 2009-08-16 12:01:44 
  
now that was quite a compliment!

PS: thank you for reading me so well!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-16 12:24:00 
  
take it all in babe... you deserve every word of it...
PS: I'm trying my best to...
Posted by  ChasingDreams  on 2009-08-16 12:42:24 
  
seems like i just got myself a wonderful reader

PS: im glad!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-16 13:24:48 
  
:) Everyone has their favorite songs, albums, and sad poems and stories to surround them when they are down. So... I'll have YOU.. :)
Posted by  ChasingDreams  on 2009-08-16 13:32:32 
  
hmmm...let's hope i live up to the expectations...
and probably lift up ur spirits..when u're feeling down..

PS: i got a tough job huh?
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-16 13:40:47 
  
You would never need to paint an improved version of you for you are truly one in a million...
I loved this post so much and someday....You are wonderful...:)
Posted by  dreampower  on 2009-08-18 22:58:10 
  
hehe..i get it..and im pleased to have you read this one!

PS: although i am hoping i'd get to paint you sometime..

(hehe)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-18 23:36:55 
  
Got your paint handy???? *smiles*
Posted by  dreampower  on 2009-08-25 02:40:58 
  
I always keep it handy...allow me to get started...cos..they say you never know when a pretty woman and the english weather might change their minds...

*winks*
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-25 02:47:25 
  
How sweet u r...:) *winks back*
Posted by  dreampower  on 2009-08-30 23:19:54 
  
na...i ain't sweet...i just like sweet things..

PS: sweet is your lovely self *innocent winks*
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-30 23:38:48 
  
wow,i read one of your blogs yeasterday and i couldnt help coming back to read more..u r amazing !
Posted by  vice_mylife  on 2009-08-19 09:55:39 
  
thank you :-)

i am glad you found me worth reading

i hope you're having a lovely day!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-19 10:12:31 
  
beautifuly written, you have an amazing gift :]
Posted by  breagan  on 2009-08-20 17:24:34 
  
thank you :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-21 01:01:54 
  
Wow. You are truly amazing at writing. The song is great, and you have a sweet voice. :)
Posted by  kawaiirocker  on 2009-08-21 13:59:42 
  
you're amazing as well..especially for talking time to read and listen!

cheers
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-22 00:50:39 
  
This was really beautiful.

-Al
Posted by  justanothervoice  on 2009-08-22 09:37:44 
  
Thank you Al :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-22 10:04:02 
  
interesting blog... ive been away for 3 weeks so i havnt had the time to keep up with everything thats going on here at thoughts!

Im currently in cyprus... i love it here but i admit homesickness is starting to work its way right through me lol... Anyway! the point was... its funny the things you miss, id kill to be sitting at my computer with a cup of tea and custerd cream reading peoples blogs such as yourself :)

However, being in this little internet cafe with a half cold coffee and plain crisps will do for now, and having read this peice of yours has made me feel a little more at home here :)

thanks for cheering me up, i can now head off to the beach BBQ smiling :D

x
Posted by  Rachel_Anthea  on 2009-08-24 05:32:00 
  
Cyprus sounds lovely!

PS: it's nice to see pretty people have pretty time!

keep smiling
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-24 05:42:16 
  
you're so eloquent...
Posted by  PoppyBright  on 2009-08-24 13:11:41 
  
thank you :-)
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-24 13:24:55 
  
Well, now I'm here under so many comments...
Every word I say now will be too banal and fade standing next to your blogs... So I'll probably just say "thank you for making me forget about reality for the time I spent reading this". ;)
You're a gift to thoughts.com...
Posted by  LuckyJulia  on 2009-08-25 06:27:28 
  
no matter what you say Julia...

your comment will always be unique..


PS: now let me thank you for considering me worth reading!
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-25 06:31:43 
  
that was beautiful so heart felt..everytime i read you i feel like i get a glimpse into your complicated thoughts as if i can read your mind..
p.s.- ithink you touched every woman out there in a special way we all want the man we love to feel this way for us..i hope you find your perfectly painted princess and she treasures you as her prince charming
Posted by  tearsinabottle  on 2009-08-30 14:32:19 
  
the only thing is i hope she doesn't keep bothering me to make her a vampire too..

PS: haha...thank you tears..i once again appriciate your taking time and reading me..i wish you the same with your painted princess too..or may be painted prince?
(can't tell anything these days) hehe
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-30 22:50:39 
  
go ahead! paint me!!
Posted by  ShaynaBella  on 2009-08-30 22:59:18 
  
go%20ahead%21%20paint%20me%21%21
Posted by  ShaynaBella  on 2009-08-30 22:59:22 
  
i wonder if i have that much talent....hehe

PS: long time huh..since i last saw u in a comment..

i hope it was a pleasent sunday that ya had~
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-30 23:32:07 
  
well!!
like i said i'm backk :]
Posted by  ShaynaBella  on 2009-08-31 01:23:22 
  
yes indeed...lovely back..i mean lovely having you back..

haha
Posted by  isuckedthemoon  on 2009-08-31 01:50:35 
  
Wow, what can I say? I come across your blogs...and this is the first one I clicked on.
Very beautiful...I read it twice!
Look forward to reading your other blogs!

Take care,
~Dee
Posted by  DeeinFL  on 2009-09-18 21:31:33 
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