Posted by
cincity304
on 2008-04-03 08:21:39 |
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| Wow...such desperation in this. Desperate for answers, desperate for love.....sad....but very genuine. Nice work. |
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Posted by
spiritualcoma
on 2008-04-03 12:27:57 |
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| Great depiction of the pain and suffering sometimes associated with love. I feel moved as you ask the same questions as I, a well written entry. |
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Posted by
bubblydi
on 2008-04-03 15:16:09 |
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Beautifully written.
Very emotional.xx |
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Posted by
Nutshell
on 2008-04-03 22:54:06 |
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| How could you possibly have 7000 views? Nice writing. |
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Posted by
Aphrodite
on 2008-04-24 14:52:44 |
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| Whoa!!! About 7000 views! You know what, I don't know who you are - but remember you are not the only one in such a situation. So do not feel disheartened and frustrated. You've wonderfully expressed your thoughts in there. Do check the story that I have posted in my blog. The girl in that story is suffering a lot and has similar feelings as you've stated in this post. In fact your poem can be interposed in my story as the girl's self-piteous soliloquy. |
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Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-01 19:17:05 |
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| Views: 7025
