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 Autumn Paradise
 Searching the horizon
Trying to discern where gray waters meet gray skies

A lonely eagle soars across the bay
Traveling to a shore I can no longer see

A soft, cold breeze caresses my neck, yet the waters are calm
A smoky mirror reflecting sunless heavens

A sudden ray of light reveals a fragment of the the distant shore
Defying the dreariness of the world

Shining down on nature's silent sentinels attired in brilliant orange, red, gold
An Autumn paradise welcoming the eagle home
    Posted by hammin8r on 2009-11-02 16:27:29 | Rating: | Views: 34
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very nice...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-11-02 16:45:14 
  
Thanks, I liked it. My poetry a still a little rusty.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-02 16:47:36 
  
aahhh keep at it good things will come the more you write...
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-11-02 16:52:28 
  
Yeah I know. The poem actually pretty easy once I started.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-02 17:26:44 
  
great blog friend
thanks for sharing
regards fraglerock
Posted by  fraglerock  on 2009-11-02 17:07:13 
  
Glad too. I'm not even sured I'd write my poetry down if I couldn't share it here.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-02 17:27:56 
  
Lovely, Hammin. =) You painted the imagery superbly. - Bia.
Posted by  Blossom  on 2009-11-02 17:11:23 
  
Thanks, Bia. Most of my poetry tries to create imagery, and I try that carry that style over to my fiction.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-02 17:29:43 
  
I agree with Bia, what a beautiful image you painted! I thoroughly enjoyed!
Posted by  brlracincwgrl  on 2009-11-02 20:50:04 
  
Thanks. It's feels great to know I accomplished what I was going for in writing something beautiful that people enjoy.
Posted by  hammin8r  on 2009-11-02 21:24:30 
  
TAG YOUR IT!

Go to my blog and find The Tag Game blog I got. Do it, like it, love it! Or not. LoL! ;0)
Posted by  IrishMike6464  on 2009-11-03 01:33:33 
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