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For my mum
If you would stay,
I could go on.
If you would hold me forever,
I could go on.

If  I could just glimps you,
out of the corner of my eye,
I could go on.

But you cannot say,
I can't go on.
You cannot hold me,
but I have to go on.

For with out me, you will be gone,
if I don't go on,
who will remember !

Posted by gilbertseyes on 2008-04-09 04:29:00 | Rating: n/a | Views: 90


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Posted by
neha1987
on 2008-04-09 05:10:07
 
Its really is a beautiful poem you have found a wonderful poem for your mom. Keep on writing such sweet poems.
 
 

Posted by
MrPeacock
on 2008-04-09 09:37:17
 
Don't worry "Mummies" live forever in our hearts.
 
 

Posted by
gilbertseyes
on 2008-04-11 07:39:46
 
Thanks, for your comments :)
 
 


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