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 Looking Through the Glass Darkly
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Sunsets are supposed to be beautiful…captivating and romantic,
But not the one that is slowly setting on what was once “you and I”.
The air hangs heavy with accusation and condemnation. I’m gasping.
Angry words crackle through the atmosphere, and sear through me.
Your eyes, once my inspiration with views of paradise, have darkened.
In blissful days, mirrors that reflected me in a warm and glorified light,
Now they’re only shards of broken glass glaring from behind your narrowed lids.
I remember your voice, a sound that made my heart leap and my body hum,
A mere memory of what it has become, as you revile me with your disdain.
A cold wind cuts through me as I grab my arms and huddle for comfort,
And I know that soon I’ll be alone in the dark and I’ll not have your hand.
I will have to find my own way, searching desperately for safety and shelter.
And the rain will fall as tears from my eyes, leaving me in cold puddles,
Mud clutching at my ankles and pulling me down toward the unforgiving earth.
Instinctively I know that, for the sake of survival and self-preservation,
In a hasty retreat, I must run as far and as fast as I can… away from you







    Posted by funfreak on 2009-10-31 14:05:26 | Rating: | Views: 356
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Wow! Awesome write and um.. a bit Halloweenish at the same time..lol:)
Posted by  SnoopsMama  on 2009-10-31 14:09:36 
  
Ha! Yeah, it was sort of a good fit... :-)
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 14:15:02 
  
I like this Freaky, nice write
Posted by  Waasyon  on 2009-10-31 14:40:16 
  
Thanks, Ian....sometimes I have ample inspiration... :-(
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 17:29:45 
  
Where did you get that picture of me and the moon?! LOL
What a great write. You are so good with words.
Happy Halloween.
Posted by  vestigesofhermind  on 2009-10-31 15:01:28 
  
I'm sorry, but that pic is all over the internet....OOooops!

Thanks....glad you liked it!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 17:30:58 
  
really very good, and mirrors my own life a little - loves ya - Puck
Posted by  puck  on 2009-10-31 15:14:36 
  
I know, Babe...that's why I can relate to so much of what you write....

Thanks for stopping... :-)
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 17:32:10 
  
WOW funfreak.. intense write! Leaves me sad <3 xx
Posted by  lolav  on 2009-10-31 17:28:11 
  
How can you be sad with that crazy avatar?!? Makes me laugh! So over the top! My kind of girl!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 17:33:46 
  
Yup I can relate to this FF
Posted by  bigd49  on 2009-10-31 18:31:00 
  
mmmmmmhhmmmmmm....thought it was a good write for tonight...
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 19:10:34 
  
Whoooo, this gave me goosebumps! Amazing! xo :)
Posted by  Kaybee  on 2009-10-31 20:08:15 
  
Ha! Thanks for reading...the goosebumps are free of charge!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-10-31 20:10:38 
  
An amazing and powerful write, Funfreak...and very apt for this time of year. =) - Bia.
Posted by  Blossom  on 2009-11-01 01:17:49 
  
Heya, Blossom...thank you...glad you liked it. :-)
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-01 01:24:54 
  
FunFreak..Loved this and the music added just the right touch. Nice!

peace :) shemelts
Posted by  shemelts  on 2009-11-01 07:14:52 
  
Thank you, smemelts....and thanks so much for stopping by...let's be friends!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-01 08:19:33 
  
FF..Oh yea, let's. :)

peace :) shemelts
Posted by  shemelts  on 2009-11-01 16:45:09 
  
well girl you certainly know how to pull the heart strings
Posted by  papabear  on 2009-11-01 07:38:08 
  
You write what you know...its works out so much better that way. :-)
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-01 08:21:42 
  
If this is inspired by real life, then I say: You are your own shelter and safety. You are all you need. Or you can always come stay with me.

If it's not: nice writing, you convinced me.
Posted by  ladiegodiva  on 2009-11-01 17:20:18 
  
Ha! Should I pack my sleeping bag?
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-01 18:34:55 
  
Wow! This is stunning, freaky!
Posted by  BootLady  on 2009-11-01 19:26:16 
  
Thank you, Boots! Love to see you. I appreciate your compliment!
Posted by  funfreak  on 2009-11-01 19:46:12 
  
"A mere memory of what it has become...." and so we have to move on. What a beautiful write Miss :o)
Posted by  Angie_vV  on 2009-11-02 14:32:08 
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