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Old 10-08-2008, 12:51 AM   #1
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Default Humane

Runnin in circles, chasin my tail
I've been knocked down, locked down
tryin to fight it all and to no avail
My life is the universe on a smaller scale
lookin out the window now wonderin why I hold my breath
And every step away gets one foot closer to my death
And I keep thinkin what the hell am I doing here?
I'm losing ground year after year
Slowly losin my mind to the fear of fear
And what is the worst part of insanity?
Finding a way to be humanely insane in humanity

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Old 10-19-2008, 11:47 AM   #2
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I liked that Larkin.I'm surprised at the lack of responses. "I've been knocked down and locked down" is a good line. I will try not to steal it for my own in one of my songs. Cuda.
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Old 10-23-2008, 07:52 AM   #3
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Default Larkin as in Philip?

The title to the respons is the entire response I'm afaid!
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