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I want your sweat.
Staining my skin.
Marking my sin.
I want to be drenched,
In you
-warm
-soft
-wet
rain.
Make my heart,
bruise against my bones.
Deafen me with your moans.
Burn me in your embrace.
Suffocate me deep inside you.
Kill me, just a little.
Make me a fallen angel;
Rend my back;
Scar me
Tear out my wings.
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Posted by focusedrage on 2007-12-22 20:27:58 | Rating: | Views: 138
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I am not much for poetry, but I like it. It hurts a little, actually.
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Posted by Chance777
on 2007-12-22 20:49:07
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I don't usually like poems I find in blogs, either. They're usually overdone treacle masquerading as bad poetry. This, however, is powerful stuff. Good work - keep it up and save the world from those who want to dribble muck and call it poetry.
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Posted by Indigo_Drift
on 2008-01-01 14:28:52
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