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The thing I hate most about this place is the...
The thing I hate most about this place is the fact that they teart me like shit. i hate them they love to beat me, touch me, and do what ever they want with me. I HATE THEM i wish they died, i want to run away and necer return but i cant because this is the only place i call home i cant leave the only place i have.  The thing I hate most about this place is the is that they killed me there and no one knew my body was in the basement rottening slowly.
Posted by fluffyman_08 on 2008-04-07 18:05:09 | Rating: n/a | Views: 45


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Posted by
mrsgee
on 2008-04-08 12:44:44
 
very vivid...

I'm not grading on grammar; however, some of the errors are simple typos, reread your stuff before posting, or post and edit... it screws with the flow for your readers.

also, CENSOR yourself!


 
 

Posted by
JCGM
on 2008-04-14 12:27:59
 
Creepy ending
 
 


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