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“Jessie I'm coming over; don't say another word; I'm on my way.” It took me about half an hour to get to her. Can you put the gun down don’t do nothing stupid. Jessie please put the gun down, you don’t want to kill your self your way to young to die. Jessie you have so much more to live for.
“Larry you don’t know what they did to me, all they did was hurt me over and over again”.
“Jessie you can’t treat them the same way. It just makes you like them. You don’t need to kill your self just because they hate you or you hate them, you can easily leave the house and start a new life.”
As Larry tried and tired to get Jessie to put the gun down, it failed because she lifted the gun to her mouth she pulled the trigger and killed her self.
THE END
Posted by fluffyman_08 on 2008-04-11 18:04:01 | Rating: n/a | Views: 45


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Posted by
JCGM
on 2008-04-24 16:54:11
 
aww that was a sad ending, too bad they failed in retaining the gun.
 
 


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