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 A poem called Hated

She's hated, lonely, by herself,like the last book on a shelf,

Hated by her family and fake friends, in her life the nightmare never ends,

Hated by herself, ugly and fat, no one cares, she feels like her uglyness flares,

Invisible to everyone except herself, and the journal she just found on her shelf,

She's different when she goes out, not herself, loud without a doubt,

Hated by her hair, she can hear the rumors in the air,

Her shadow slowly drifts away, on a regular day,

Her room and her journals are her only friends,

She's hated by everyone, even herself, she now wishes to be that book on the shelf, 

ATLEAST PEOPLE CAN SEE IT. 

    Posted by everybodyhasthegoodscreenames on 2007-08-20 20:28:55 | Rating: | Views: 97
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WHOA!!! are you really that lonely?
Posted by  Marriedwidow  on 2007-08-20 20:36:03 
  
Ah, that's good. [= I really like this one a bit more than the other one. I like the imagery and the depth of it! Well, as for suicidal stuff, that was in third grade so I didn't actually cut myself or anything (I didn't know of it). I just sort of climbed onto the roof and looked at the sky and the valley we lived near and thought. I think that every time I actually did think about suicide, I reprimanded myself and I sort of grew out of that stage. [= Now, if it's loneliness you're talking 'bout, I have some experience there. In 7th grade, I could count the names of my friends, on three fingers. We weren't good friends, not at all but still friends. Well, good luck with everything. Be spontaneous and throw yourself out there, laugh and smile and just have fun!
Posted by  Sirem  on 2007-08-20 20:55:55 
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