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I dunno if I ever told you this bry, but you were always a wonderful writer. I think you need to keep writing
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| Posted in
The One Want on 2008-05-19 12:12:48 |
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I really liked the form of how you wrote this. i especically liked "You are late today, you are tardy
Come over here baby
and join my love making party"
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| Posted in
Burning Desire on 2008-05-19 12:10:50 |
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i dont think the ending fits with it, but i never HAVE ended poems well
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| Posted in
Eighth Notes and Rests on 2008-05-15 12:37:50 |
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