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 She Wants to Go Home
Headboards bang;
Mattress sang,
Squating on all four;
Only pain is in store.
Eyes squinting and pleading;
She can feel herself bleeding.
He thrusts like there is no tomorrow;
Selfishly not considering her sorrow.
He leaves without a word,
Makes out the door fast like a bird.
Tears streaming;
Bloody screaming.
She's been hurt very bad,
By a man whose her dad.




Razorblade friend,
Please let this be the end.
I don't want to be here,
My dad is whom I fear.
Take me away to Heaven of glory,
And let this be the end of my story.
    Posted by el__muerte on 2008-09-07 02:47:06 | Rating: | Views: 710
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Love this.
Posted by  StayingAlive  on 2008-09-07 05:16:22 
  
This speaks in a lot of different ways. Too many fathers are raping their daughters. It's become a sort of "trend". It's awful and it can ruin the person's life forever.

Posted by  BrennanEckhardt  on 2008-09-07 18:19:11 
  
This says so many things, in so many ways. It does not necessarily have to be your father or mother, but maybe a relative. I have never said anything to anyone about what has happened to me. Nor will I probable ever. I have always had an issue with trusting men since then and it continues to haunt me today, 28 years later.
Thank you for showing how some people feel.
Posted by  envimii  on 2008-10-15 17:52:37 
  
your poems always seem so strong
I commend you on your talent
Posted by  nobodygetskatie  on 2009-03-15 14:57:57 
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