Posted by
smileforthecamera
on 2008-04-16 17:23:36 |
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| Tough decision. The trouble with suicide is that when you cahnge your mind, its often too late. This is good hun :] |
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Posted by
erica3
on 2008-04-17 12:25:27 |
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| this is really heartbreaking and really good hun. thing is we all have memories, some good and some bad. what we do with that is up to us, hopefully we use those bad memories to make us stronger. :) |
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Posted by
roe
on 2008-04-24 23:37:35 |
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| His eyes have lost their light, how sad! |
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Posted by
roe
on 2008-04-24 23:37:37 |
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| His eyes have lost their light, how sad! |
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Posted by
chrissy0590
on 2008-04-26 01:31:30 |
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| The feeling that come when a poem is read will determ if and how you relate to it.... Your poem is sad but so easy for me to relate to and im sure alot of others but i have come to realise that with every bad memory there is a good one but if its like me the bad always out way the good...... |
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Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-01 19:37:15 |
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| This is well written eeerm, are you ok? |
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Posted by
necronomincon
on 2008-05-02 11:29:32 |
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| memeories can be so powerful |
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Posted by
DreamingOfBruxelles
on 2008-05-07 03:03:05 |
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Posted by
spotz
on 2008-05-14 15:22:21 |
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| DI KNOW YOU WERE SUCH A POET!! |
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Posted by
Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-17 11:47:40 |
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| ouch. its good. cept id change the "wetting the bed with tears" to, idk... "wetting the PILLOW with tears." cuz b4 i read the word tears i get the wrong idea. hee hee. u dont have 2 change it tho just 4 us perverts. but still, ud have to either be crying 4 a REALLY LONG time, or ud have 2 be a giant 2 wet the WHOLE bed like that. eh, just me. dowhatchawant! xo |
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