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I'm crumbling,
The rubble is dropping and I can't control it,
i need you to stop leaning on me,
I want you to lean harder,
I just want you problem free,
Careless and footloose,
All this time I thought I was strong,
But I can't let you see my cracks,
You cannot worry for my wellbeing,
It is your heart we are trying to fix,
But it is your heart that worries me,
For, was I to fall, you would crash with me,
Terrible predicament,
So please,
I beg of you,
Without saying a word,
I silently wait and hope I'm not destroyed,
Build your own wall,
So I may stand tall again.
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Posted by eeerm on 2008-04-10 16:51:35 | Rating: | Views: 116
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Its freaky how closely I can relate to each of your posts..very, very freaky..
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-04-11 01:54:42
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breath taking!!
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Posted by InsertHere
on 2008-04-17 11:37:21
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I completely relate to this honey, you a pretty damn good at this poetry lark... some fool once argued with me that poets and lyricists are not the same ha ha what do you recon eeerm?
x
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-05-01 19:39:11
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i have always had a wall up,i know how you feel
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Posted by necronomincon
on 2008-05-02 11:28:59
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awesome! u make the metaphoric views interesting.
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-17 15:28:01
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