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Into my life you floated,
Never seen you before,
Nothing but words on a screen.
With those words you reached,
Deep inside my soul,
Left me changed, Uncontent,
Just a glimpse is all,
All i needed to have,
Just to see your face,
And Now Your Gone,
It Hurts So Bad,
Can't See You Again,
So Damn Sad,
Such a great time,
Time of my life,
I'll never forget your laugh,
A 3 hour trip,
To meet up with you,
But the effort is worth the reward,
And Now Your Gone,
It Hurts So Bad,
Can't See You Again,
So Damn Sad,
Know that I love you,
Know that I care,
Know you'll be with me forever,
Inside with every breath. |
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Posted by eeerm on 2008-05-21 08:24:12 | Rating: | Views: 112
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Aw, what happened? why has she gone?
I hope things are ok with you. This one was amazing too..
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-21 08:39:07
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Know you'll be with her forever,
Inside with every breath.
Its gonna be pretty damn hard for her to forget you and remember, you never know what the future will bring.
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Posted by smileforthecamera
on 2008-05-21 16:54:45
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wow, that was amazing... i could never write a poem so long. i seem to run out of interest for the topic im writing about. but, part of the reason that my thinking is (to you atleast) immature and young is because I AM young. Honey, im 13 years old...
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Posted by meggiem11
on 2008-05-22 16:45:28
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Wow hun...
I wonder...
No I won't ask, its so intusive.
Best wishes love...
<3
Love you....?
*kisses*
-Angel
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Posted by angel_devil
on 2008-05-23 16:41:11
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hey what happened?
this is so touching ... she should have read this.
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Posted by DreamingOfBruxelles
on 2008-05-23 21:37:59
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l like it 2 =]
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-25 15:11:57
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I felt this poem so much! It reminds me of someone I love very much. . .This one is my favorite so far. You're amazing!
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Posted by toxicmeg09
on 2008-05-28 20:34:20
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wow, i really like it. y is she gone? words on a screen? do u know her from a website? i ♥ it. i wanna meet u, i like intimate guys.
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-05-31 13:34:34
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