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Hello,
My dear,
I've been waiting for you,
Come,
Over hear,
I've been waiting for you.
Your not the man i've been looking for,
She says,
Your not the guy who sweetens my dreams,
She says
Stay away for I don't know who you are,
I've never seen you before!!!!
Mary,
It's me.
I gave you that ring on your finger,
Darling,
I'm yours
I gave you that ring on your finger,
Your not the man i've been looking for,
She says,
Your not the guy who plagued my dreams,
She says
Stay away for I don't know who you are,
I've never seen you before!!!!
Surely,
You remember,
I'm the one you married,
Hunni,
Try to remember,
I'm the one you love.
Your not the man i've been looking for,
She says,
Your not the guy who plagued my dreams,
She says
Stay away for I don't know who you are,
I've never seen you before!!!!
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Posted by eeerm on 2008-05-27 15:51:57 | Rating: | Views: 94
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Really sad...
You write so well, eeerm. You really have it in you to become a great lyricist.
I saw a movie like this...where the wife doesnt remember the husband...its really sad...
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-28 01:58:52
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It's really sad & deep, but for some reason i appreciate poems like this more. Because they're more heartfelt than any other kind.
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Posted by toxicmeg09
on 2008-05-28 20:32:46
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hey how come no one rated this ...
loved it eeerm ... it deeply touched my heart.
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Posted by DreamingOfBruxelles
on 2008-05-29 00:29:31
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I can't believe that you're only 16! Amazing! Watched powerthirst...weird!
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Posted by Mumsi
on 2008-05-30 16:27:08
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this is heartbreaking like smiles said. :(
but such a good poem hun. wow..
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Posted by pixierose
on 2008-05-30 16:27:37
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excrutiating and depressing. but so good u can feel his pain. usually id laff at somethin like this, but most ppls attempts r just lame. URS, tho, is GREAT.
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-05-31 20:56:51
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you are only 16
Im blown away
this is so good and so sad at the same time
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Posted by roe
on 2008-06-05 00:33:39
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Really great. Notbook inspiration? It's AMAZING
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Posted by screamingyellowxD
on 2008-06-19 12:29:48
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eerm, I am brushing up on your posts. this one is really really really amazing. such a true post.
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-24 18:38:57
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