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A Song For VailBabyM

Alone

I can't pretend anymore,
That everythings alright,
inside,
I can't lie anymore,
About the raging fight,
Inside,

You all offer me your shoulders,
So I can place my tears somewhere caring,
You all lend me your ears,
So I can utter the words never spoken,

But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
I'm not that broken,
But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
your really not helping,

I can't go on anymore,
without your soul,
In my life,
I can't live anymore,
with this gaping hole,
In my life,

You all offer me your shoulders,
So I can place my tears somewhere caring,
You all lend me your ears,
So I can utter the words never spoken,

But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
I'm not that broken,
But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
your really not helping,

Offer me your shoulders,
Place my tears,
Lend me your ears,
Utter the words,

But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
I'm not that broken,
But PLEASE,
leave me alone,
your really not helping,

Leave me alone.

Posted by eeerm on 2008-03-07 04:51:06 | Rating:

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		Super! Your poetry is really good!
Posted by wlamebull on 2008-03-07 11:42:25


		this is amazing. :)
Posted by VailBabyM on 2008-03-07 12:12:56


		another amazing song
Posted by necronomincon on 2008-03-07 18:47:44


		Seriously you should publish these. ps. Where is my song love? :]
Posted by smileforthecamera on 2008-03-07 19:33:57


		I am so in awe... I can't find the words.
Posted by InsertHere on 2008-03-08 01:24:01


		This is amazing Really meaningful x
Posted by unreachable on 2008-03-08 09:16:39


		Thanks everyone :D
Posted by eeerm on 2008-03-08 13:22:12


		This really kicked some balls.....pardon the expression but wanted to express. I love the dark side of the world. Keep it up.
Posted by Nutshell on 2008-03-08 23:57:00


		your writing is totaly awsome you put into words many things people feel but do not voice out loud i think they are beautiful thank you
Posted by cheyeene39 on 2008-03-14 17:49:15