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We cant.....
How does a mother,
tell her child she’s dying,
while she’s giving birth,
to that same child?

She can’t.

How does a soldier,
ask his lovers hand in marriage,
while they’re 500 miles apart,
and he’s being blown up into pieces?

He Can’t.

How do depressed teens,
tell their parents they want to die,
when they’re parents are gone for the night,
and they have a loaded gun in their hands?

They can’t.

How do us kids,
tell our friends we want to quit,
when we accidently overdose,
and no one’s around?

We can’t.
Posted by dreaming on 2008-04-30 15:13:19 | Rating: n/a | Views: 204


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Posted by
lastblastkl
on 2008-04-30 15:48:35
 
This is a very good post dreaming...very powerful stuff...K
 
 

Posted by
parisbebe
on 2008-04-30 15:57:13
 
beautiful and moving
 
 

Posted by
RobD
on 2008-04-30 20:45:58
 
Hey Yo, Wud up.
I'm Chris T. H
 
 

Posted by
RobD
on 2008-04-30 20:54:30
 
Hey I like your poetry. But life isn't so dark, you know? look on the brighter side of things sometimes. Other than that keep writing your really good. I especially like this one. I think it means don't wait untill later to do things because it might be to late. am I right or wrong on this?
 
 

Posted by
jessicahgist
on 2008-05-01 01:40:39
 
that was very good. amazing
 
 

Posted by
prelude2it
on 2008-05-01 10:05:17
 
very moving.
 
 

Posted by
Blazor
on 2008-05-01 18:27:33
 
Very beautiful!
 
 

Posted by
dreaming
on 2008-05-02 14:43:40
 
RobD,
Yeah, you're partially right.
 
 


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