This is one of many songs that i've yet to finish so I'll need some feedback


Nights with lullabies /Fading fast with lies /I miss those lovely nights /And I loved you without fright//
But now those nights are gone / And I cant see you now /You live so far away / "I love you's" you wont say //

*Chorus*
Please come back to me /Sing me lullabies /Say you really miss me /pleas e dont make me cry /I feelso much pain /every single day /C'uz you arent here with me /like a family....../Our family.....

And so  Im older now /The years have gone so fast /I try not to think / about my  lonely past / cant be perfect now /But I wont apologize / I want to know if you can see /Through my tearful eyes//





Well thats all I have so far and Its missing a lot as you can tell.
So If you could tell me what you think I'd appreciate it.