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I sat in my back yard
Feeling the sun on my face.
Still cool out side
wanting time to erase

erase the things of my past
mistakes I have made
People who have hurt me
better plans to be layed

Dream of a day my true love
though I know not who he is
Thoughts seem to wander
imagining the first kiss

Though the people who have hurt me
and loves that I have known
Have molded me into the person I am
and for that I shall not atone

So much love to give
still many years to go
I sit here in the sun
Thinking of a love I will never know
Posted by dawnmarie on 2008-05-02 16:29:09 | Rating: | Views: 29


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Posted by
missmarie
on 2008-05-04 16:22:11
 
Wow! honey this is a fantastic poem!
i love it, keep writing xxx
 
 


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