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wow... this is a real downer... by the way i have a question... whats so bad about "drinking or kissing"?... and a brief answer to "who could love and accept this brokeness?": much love from me to you ;)
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| Posted in
Sound of Breaking on 2008-03-02 18:36:22 |
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i really hope you dont mind if i offer some humble constructive critism... it seems like your rhythm, your poetic "flow", is somewhat off-balance during "my mind... rewind"... a great example of this kind of "flow obstruction" would be up top, where i wrote "humble constructive criticism"... it...
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| Posted in
Ocean of Emotions on 2008-03-02 18:25:35 |
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