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hmmm... this is like a brain vomit post...
setting: insane asylum
plot: there is this one patient [John Smart] who hates everyone in the asylum and has an idea how to get rid of everyone. He starts convincing the rest of the patients that they are not insane, but they are here because they posess special knowledge and the government wants them kept away so they wont tell anyone this special knowledge. So John leads a 'mutiny' against all the staff and him with his army of loonies kill them in a really gruesome way. Eventually John picks the loonies off one by one, telling them they can do certain things that eventually end up killing them.
and yeah... any feedback??
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Posted by constructive_distruction on 2007-10-29 12:07:28 | Rating: | Views: 67
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The start was quite good...but once you got to the gruesome deaths and trickery of the "loonies", it all falls apart. Try putting in more character depth to each of the other inmates--sort of like other prison movies(Shawshank Redemption/One Flew Over the Coo-Coo Nest). Have the mutiny, but with less tragic/intense death and more tragedy perhaps(say one or more get grabbed and injected with something to contain them or turn them against each other. Consider making unique, distinguishable characters the way they do in animated films to sell toys but for the purpose of registering the character with the viewer's memory(a bunch of inmates who act or look alike won't be remembered). Another key factor, a punchy title...not like some of the lame ones released recently--some on good movies.
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Posted by brainstormer
on 2007-10-29 15:09:49
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hmm. bloody deaths are the best. i love movies like that cause are flippen corny, but they still terrify me. good start, could use a little more thought though. did you have a specific reason for this particular movie?
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Posted by violet_maeee
on 2007-11-01 13:12:48
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