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Patricia strode up the walkway after getting out of the red camaro. It was afternoon already.
She walked up to the door next to John, and inside as soon as it swung open. "You would have me out in front of the neighbors in this"! She pulled at the low neckline of her skimpy top.
"Oh, I think they liked it", John replied. "I saw curtains moving across the street". "You made me parade around as if it was prom night.".
Patricia sat down,and straighted up immediately, remembering the "tramp stamp" which was only ink, not a real tattoo. "Will you help me get this off"? "I think it comes off with baby oil". "Awww, can't it stay awhile? I kinda like it". She mock glared at him, and went into the bathroom.
"I'm waitinngg" he heard, and went to help.
She had wriggled out of the tight skirt, and kicked the boots off. She stood there in impossibly insubstantial panties. He leered at her, "Didn't get enough, huh"? She gave him one of her side glances, and handed him an oily cotton pad. "Get busy mister". Then they both laughed.
She said: "You looked great"." I loved it when you showed up at the curb". He said:" I couldn't believe it when you showed up with purple hair" They wiped at the ink, and showered off the oil, and went to thier room to change.
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Posted by circe on 2008-08-02 02:34:38 | Rating: | Views: 115
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you know something...i just really like 'tension'...i'm always trying to think of ways to notch it up...you get it great in the looks and snappy dialogue...very nice!
cheers!
:)
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2008-08-02 13:45:07
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You notched it WAY up at "Brunch", cheers to you!
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Posted by circe
on 2008-08-02 16:13:47
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what if we got together on one...i'll do the nasty 'body parts' bit and you throw in your great dialogue and meaningful glances...lets notch it up to '11'... :p ...make something so tight and so edgey that it just makes you *squirm*
*evil laugh*
cheers!
:)
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2008-08-03 13:39:23
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Deal! Squirming already!:S
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Posted by circe
on 2008-08-03 15:05:38
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I like your stories and wish so bad I had a good book to get lost in right now.
Usually I can get interested in anything but lately nothing much is holding my attention. I wish you had something published I could sit around with!
I have a hard time getting comfortable to read for long periods of time on the computer. It seems a strain on the eyes.
Anyway good job and if you get something published I get one of the first copies right?? ;)
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-08-06 10:47:22
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you bet sweetie,if I get published,you get one of the first.
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Posted by circe
on 2008-08-06 11:24:35
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this one is good. looking forward to installment 3
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Posted by cwzywbt
on 2008-08-07 00:07:11
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