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 Lonely
 Another fiction this time based on my own struggles.

“DONT TOUCH ME!!!!” She screams at the top of her lungs.
The rest of the people in the crowded corridor turn to look at her in wonder. She is usually so calm, so collected. The boy in question looks hurt. Nobody understands; they were so good together on the outside. But then that girl has always had a secretive side. A side she never shows. Perhaps the relationship has brought that side to the surface... makes her act on her loneliness. Of course, nobody had realised she was lonely, the loneliness is hidden behind big brown eyes and permanent dimples but it was there, lurking in the darkness so the whenever she is alone she felt it sneak up on her she was lonely. No amount of kisses or hugs or friends could change that. And what was worse she knew what she was missing. She was missing her creator. The one constant in her life had been put on a top shelf to gather dust put aside for “more important” things. Now she knows what she is missing and as she reacquaints her knees with the carpet to pray she feels the loneliness drift away and she is at peace for the first time in years.


    Posted by carzeebear on 2009-11-05 00:48:17 | Rating: | Views: 7
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