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SubTomato
on 2008-03-31 00:07:00 |
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Posted by
keepdreaming
on 2008-03-31 00:30:14 |
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Brainstormer...
You have no idea how much I wish I could help you, or how I wish I'd have the magic words to turn your life around. But I know words won't help. I know what you are looking for is close companionship, and nothing anyone says will mend your broken and lonely heart. Just try to keep the faith. OK?
I loved your poem. It was beautiful, and very full of feeling. WOW...what talent!
I'm keeping you in my prayers guy!
Luv 2 U! |
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Posted by
angelwings
on 2008-03-31 01:14:25 |
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Beautiful entry...I agree with you about
"When I meet someone online
and grow to like them so much
but can't be with them
for any length of time
for whatever reason,
it hurts to breathe.
I just want to be there
or have them here.
NOW."
Totally totally get that... |
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Posted by
EasyToSay
on 2008-03-31 01:36:22 |
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wow, that was amazing. You know when I first came here on Thoughts, I side stepped all the poetry .... but I've learnt that there are many talented people on here that have made poetry really enjoyable to read. And you have done this here. (not that I'm an expert! - like a non-smoker telling a chain smoker how well he just blew a smoke ring!)
Thank you for sharing, and I must admit I've been reading your posts lately and hey, what can I say I keep coming back...
hope you find your smile, your soul is ready. |
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Posted by
Gwatlan
on 2008-03-31 04:37:17 |
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I know that you are a kind hearted and sensitif man.
It is good sometimes to let all the tears running down. Just like like the pitter patter of rain drops...when they stop you can see the beauty of a rainbow over the sky.....
Wishing you the very best. Love the poem. |
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Posted by
Zillah
on 2008-03-31 16:08:22 |
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Your words are truly beautiful.
I love words and writing and anything to do with those two things.
To tell you how wonderful your words are and how much I enjoyed them, still wouldn't do them justice.
I love it. So much. I know how you feel as well, so thats also part of it.
Just, wow. I need more people like you to exist in my world.
(be my friend?)
<3
You deserve the very best. |
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Posted by
BitterSweet
on 2008-03-31 21:12:25 |
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I am always feeling something lately
which I can never put into words
... Ditto. |
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Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2008-04-01 02:06:07 |
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Raindrops -teardrops.
I catch them both in the palm of my hand.
I know a "Rain Dance."
An authentic Native dance.
I designed it myself.
You do not even have to move for this dance.
I call it....The Dance of Tears.
Cry....that will make the rain fall down. |
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Posted by
Slash
on 2008-04-01 17:32:59 |
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genuine entry. hearwarming.
i am not in a position where i am helping a lot of people out. but i have had that feeling where i want to be with someone i have just randomly met. i have finally experienced a beautiful stranger. and it feels good... |
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Posted by
foxx_flie
on 2008-04-04 13:32:15 |
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now u got that song (which i hate) stuck in my head.
on a serious note, sorry to hear ur so lonely. i kno the feeling well. |
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Posted by
circe
on 2008-04-10 00:48:49 |
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| lovely...isn't that a pretty word? |
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Posted by
Rubicon
on 2008-04-22 03:02:53 |
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| You are a superhero! That poem has touched many, in more ways that you will ever know. You are a true artist. |
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