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ive got the words
locked away
and ive forgotten the combination
im trapped
inside myself
and mostly
i fear
what ive always known
has not ever been here

my hearts never been quite full
that little pocket of funk
just pokes away at me
and my visions
of myself
seems to fade away
with the short day

jellyfaced women

and i cant get her outta my mind
its not mine to think of her
im just a parasite
ive lived up to my name
im no longer simply insane
im whatever she claims

witch




how i wish i could write poetry
but whenever i do
i feel so ashamed
of my own unskill

theres no life like death
    Posted by benventure on 2008-04-30 04:12:09 | Rating: | Views: 99
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There is no skill to writing poetry. Open your heart and let drops of blood flow. The letters they form? There's your poetry.
Posted by  scotslad60  on 2008-05-01 12:00:29 
  
I like your stuff Ben, makes me wonder...what the hell he's on !!! just kidding I love trying to see how many things I could possibly get out of them..
Posted by  Wayne  on 2008-05-05 08:39:37 
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