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daddy, why cant u love me?
a love that should be strong is falling apart
we cant trust each other or make a fresh start
when we try to talk you just end up yelling at me
my tears have blinded my eyes so i cannot see
those words you yell hurt me more than you think
i dont think i'm the one who needs the shrink
dont you see all the things i could be?
daddy why cant you just love me......?
Posted by beautifullybroken333 on 2008-04-15 15:28:47 | Rating: n/a | Views: 68


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Posted by
2marie
on 2008-04-16 22:43:13
 
Wow. That's really good.
 
 

Posted by
xxuglyducklingxx
on 2008-05-05 18:11:36
 
That's really really good and i totally can relate; keep writing i look foward to seeing you accel =]
 
 

Posted by
AllThingsBuck
on 2008-05-08 15:56:43
 
no shrink could have a better grasp on you than you do, love. how do i know? i have counseled more than 5000 teens. i love you like a bird loves the air. you are awesome.
 
 

Posted by
smileforthecamera
on 2008-05-11 21:59:25
 
Sweetheart, if anyone can relate to this post, its me.
 
 


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