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A Playground Song for Children in Four Verses.
If this is love,
then let it be;
instead of warming
your gaze kills passively.
If this is a touch,
then let it be;
It feels like ice
and stings as the open sea.
If this is the end,
then let it be;
I could never give
what you want from me.
If this is death,
then let it be;
mine is a life
far too empty for me.
Goodbye.
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman on 2007-11-05 18:54:55 | Rating: | Views: 167
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Your life is not empty...never say goodbye....just see you later.
This would make a child cry! hehe.
It made me teary.
Are you really saying goodbye?
I would cry...you are just starting to grow on me!
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-05 19:39:13
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Please don't go.
Don't say goodbye.
I love your posts.xx
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Posted by bubblydi
on 2007-11-06 07:34:56
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I've come over all weepy!!!!!
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Posted by bede
on 2007-11-06 14:20:46
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I mean, you're not realy leaving,right? It's just a poem, right? Right???
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Posted by CavedogRob
on 2007-11-06 19:21:36
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Yes, I am wondering that too - dont you dare go ..soft smile and hug
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Posted by kentlass
on 2007-11-07 09:53:04
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Hey Stickman! Thanx for ur comment, I feel much better now :) prob just stress and other assorted things lol. Yeah those damn salesman with my tv!! lol i'll get them :D
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Posted by brokenangel
on 2007-11-07 16:31:10
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Rad poem, kind of sad, but in a way that makes me smile.
p.s. No one will ever get over John, he's my hero. lol
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Posted by TheMidnightCowgirl
on 2007-11-07 19:15:41
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Thankyou for giving me advice on my post.
Great poem by the way.
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Posted by Helpme
on 2007-11-08 07:44:47
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i love this. "gaze kills passivley"- very strong line.
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Posted by myveryownsoapopera
on 2007-11-08 11:25:59
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First thing I did was look at the bottom to see if this is real or if you are kidding, it's just a poem, right?
I am just getting to know you, I would be sad. You always have encouraging things to say to people.
Love ya Stickman
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Posted by trevorjohn
on 2007-11-08 20:18:02
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good bye to death right, not a warning
more like, hello to life, and good morning
right
or
left behind?
I hate good byes!
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Posted by roe
on 2007-11-09 11:41:35
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good bye
makes me cry
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Posted by roe
on 2007-11-09 11:42:18
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Great poem. I wish I had a girlfriend to recite it to.
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Posted by SubTomato
on 2007-11-09 21:15:12
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See what I started with my dramatic flair? hahaha
It was a poem, wasn't it?
I knew it was.
I told you that I like to tease.
You now see how loved you are.
You better not disappear.
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-10 20:40:49
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this is amazing.
you have talent.
loads of talent
this poem is beautiful
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Posted by kiah
on 2007-12-02 00:37:58
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