Posted by
scotslad60
on 2007-11-18 10:28:36 |
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| Nice one. Can almsot feel this. |
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Posted by
kentlass
on 2007-11-18 16:02:39 |
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Yes, you merge the reader in well - hug
thank you hon |
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Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-18 22:22:06 |
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Just take a step closer.
Nice one.
Made me feeeeeel. |
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Posted by
seniorlady
on 2007-11-19 10:43:15 |
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Nice job. Think many of us have been in "this space" before.
Senior Lady |
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Posted by
badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-11-19 12:17:26 |
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hi all!
seniorlady is right: many of us have to traverse 'this space' - unfortunate but true...
the 'feeling' thing is interesting - i don't know how successful i am but i try to use words and the sounds of words to 'encapsulate' an emotional response - hope some of you are getting it....
thanks and xoxo
:o)
cheers! |
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Posted by
harliee
on 2007-11-19 12:43:56 |
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| This is great! Well done :) |
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Posted by
brokenangel
on 2007-11-19 18:31:53 |
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Great once again! :D what everyone says is right, definitely feel your words
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Posted by
roe
on 2007-11-20 20:57:08 |
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| you must speak from experience, you really nailed that empty space, I hope you fill it with joy soon |
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Posted by
Rachele
on 2007-11-21 20:25:37 |
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| 5 Stars for "Space" is not enough. Sad topic but expressive matter...REALLY good. |
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Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-23 21:42:28 |
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Your writing has raw emotion in it.
That is what I mean by feeeel.
You stir many emotions in what you write.
I felt it in the first story I ever read of yours...the story of Anne and her father on the trip.
Your stories are life like.
You write from the heart...that is my conclusion.
I know how you do not like when I say this to you...but you do have a lovely heart. |
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