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The night slips over
and caresses,
like a silent, cautious lover;
With limbs of damask
suppleness – enfolds,
entwines and holds.
Her gentle rhythm
and glistening
pools are sleeping ecstasy;
fluid darkness envelopes
and greets,
night comes – silence.
Oh, beautiful, naked lover,
scarce felt;
drifting into sated swoon,
possess me forever, and
hold me in your rapture.
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Oh my goodness! *blush* - i got a bit sexy on this one ;o) i think it might have something to do with morrison's 'graveyard poem' but i'm not sure.
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LOL I like it
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Posted by Whitters
on 2007-11-12 13:56:59
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I think you are just expressing your heart's desire.
We all desire that...it is part of our genetic and spiritual makeup.
It is cute that you are embarrassed.
I am like that too.
I sure like reading things like this though...but only if it is classy...like this one.
My favorite part was...Oh beautiful naked lover.
hehe.
Hey...Your schooling must have started.
Remember...I am the teacher.
You get an A plus for this one.
Well done.
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-12 17:03:40
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hold me in your rapture
what a cool line
I like your poems
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Posted by roe
on 2007-11-12 19:48:06
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nice...
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Posted by CavedogRob
on 2007-11-12 20:09:36
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Just read your new comment! ROTFL! I think I read that novel "I The Stickman"
right?
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Posted by CavedogRob
on 2007-11-12 20:42:07
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And you were talking about me being enrolled in Difficultsouls class? I think eventually everyone will. Remember Stir the Soul, you know you want to!
Sexy poem, made me blush too!
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Posted by trevorjohn
on 2007-11-13 05:30:12
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See what you have started now DS.Ha Ha.
Love it stickman.xx
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Posted by bubblydi
on 2007-11-13 06:52:11
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hi guys!
thank you all so much for the positive comments however i think there's a darker theme in here that y'all are missing...
:o)
cheers!
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-11-13 07:41:45
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Go Cheeky Monkey
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Posted by ladiegodiva
on 2007-11-13 14:53:48
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Where is the dark theme in Sexual Love?
You missed my class called.....
Sexual Love 101!
Detention young blushing man. hehe
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-13 17:57:06
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oh! well ummm....
gosh!
i, ahhhh....
i guess if i can have my detention with you 'difficult' then it's ok.
;o)
haha
:o)
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-11-13 21:54:34
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Detention starts now.
We write sentences in detention.
You shall write 100 times:
I will Stir the Soul!
hehe
Get busy..I want them by tomorrow.
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-14 00:06:02
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Your poems are so full of feeling..they are not just words but emotional triggers. You're very talented.
Senior Lady
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Posted by seniorlady
on 2007-11-17 22:43:52
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oh dear i've come over all unnessesary lol thats lovely x
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Posted by missmarie
on 2007-12-29 10:51:20
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