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Under a blood-red moon,
I seek communion
with you.
Sputtering and stammering,
my words are guilt
with fool’s gold.
Watched by a blood-red moon;
the stars are my witness
in confession.
Heaving painful prayers
to your presence
I receive your blessing.
A blood-red moon
is my witness
to your holy caste.
Entwined and straining;
touch is benediction,
and climax, our absolution.
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Oh dear! There I go again. LOL!
There was, in fact, a fantastic moonrise tonight, and I was listening to something by Ben Harper (‘Glory and Consequence’ on the Live from Mars cd) – that’s what got me on this theme. Maybe I need to get out more. :o(
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman on 2007-11-25 18:58:20 | Rating: | Views: 98
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Wow, I just love your stuff, again, I wish I could express myself like this!
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Posted by Rajah1116
on 2007-11-25 19:19:31
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Badlydrawn we have alot to learn from each other.
Cheers!
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Posted by trevorjohn
on 2007-11-25 19:30:33
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Oh by the way are you sure you dont know how to get vulnerable?
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Posted by trevorjohn
on 2007-11-25 19:31:57
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haha!
you guys are fun!
thanks raj!: maybe you're just not using the right form for you! you just need to find something that feels right!
cheers tj!: you kill me! I'm too old and far too single to go for that stuff!! :oD
:o)
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-11-25 19:41:46
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hey i do love choclate!so did you write that?it rocked almost as much as me!lol!
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Posted by kadetlegs13
on 2007-11-25 19:59:05
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Ah! There was a full moon here last night! That poem was awesome. I wish I could write like that. Guess I'll have to live vicariously through you! lol
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Posted by CavedogRob
on 2007-11-26 19:31:08
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Difficult Soul is speechless.
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Posted by DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-27 13:57:41
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I loved it.
What more can i say?xx
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Posted by bubblydi
on 2007-11-28 04:40:26
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Your poems are getting deeper and better each ttime I have the pleasure to read bdsm
thank you hon - hug
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Posted by kentlass
on 2007-12-01 09:50:10
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I agree with Kentlass. You are getting better and better each time if it is even possible for you to be better :). Loved it.
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Posted by brokenangel
on 2007-12-03 23:08:27
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WOW!!
i am so impressed
i wasn't gonna sit at the comp all day today, but i cant stop reading you x
i can be serious you know x
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Posted by missmarie
on 2007-12-29 10:01:13
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