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Empty.

I am the vessel for you;

fill me with your presence:

My eyes are blind to the world,

if they catch not a glimpse of you;

The ears, that formerly heard sweetness,

are deaf but to your gentle song;

A nose, without your scent,

recalls only a crumbling, dead garden;

My tongue would speak, ‘I love you’

yet cannot mumble but incomprehensible;

My blood, formerly rich and quick,

deadens and slows in wishing for you.

For what is the value of my flesh

Without the bounty of your touch?

Posted by badlydrawnstickman on 2007-11-01 20:15:01 | Rating: | Views: 162


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Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-01 21:16:53
 
How beautifully romantic.
Every man should love like this...and every woman blessed with this kind of love.
 
 

Posted by
badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-11-01 21:31:20
 
thank you, difficult.
:o)
 
 

Posted by
MAK
on 2007-11-02 16:37:25
 
yeah, that's awesome stick dude!!!
=D keep it going!
 
 

Posted by
TheMidnightCowgirl
on 2007-11-02 16:52:59
 
That's rad! BADLYDRAWNSTICKMAN ROCKS!!!. lol. Peace~
 
 

Posted by
SubTomato
on 2007-11-03 19:33:54
 
I'll try my best not to think of this beautiful poem because it reminds me of what it would be like if I was never rejected. Unfortunately, I've been rejected nine times already. lol. What a way to go.
 
 

Posted by
jean_valjean
on 2007-11-04 15:27:46
 
You are a master of showing the kind of desire I cannot help but hide. amazing and inspiring
 
 

Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-11-04 19:17:00
 
I left a friend request for you on your profile page.
Makes for easier access to your journal.
I would be honored if you accepted.
 
 

Posted by
bede
on 2007-11-06 14:14:38
 
This is so very romantic. If I was younger I could easily develop a crush!

As I am not younger this poem just brings back wonderful memories. Thanks :) :)
 
 

Posted by
phoenix
on 2007-11-07 14:43:29
 
fantastic! very romantic. it makes me think of the kind of relationship i want... but i'm guessing thats impossible lol...
 
 

Posted by
Whitters
on 2007-11-09 12:11:30
 
I just fell in love with this blog.
 
 

Posted by
roe
on 2007-11-20 21:00:08
 
stick to it stick man
you have talent
 
 


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