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Bend until you break,
like a prisoner on a wheel.
Bend to my whim and will,
like a sapling to the wind.
Bend until you break.
Flurries of fists.
“I will always love you.”
Volleys of shouts.
“I will always love you.”
Bruises and whispered excuses.
Kneel and beg forgiveness,
like a parishioner at the cross.
Kneel and hold your tongue,
like the condemned in the cell.
Kneel and feel worthless.
I will always love you.
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman on 2008-03-14 20:49:44 | Rating: | Views: 92
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Oooo! lighten up there 'man of the badly drawn stick'
My golden bough breaks under the pressure of your verse!!
I like it though :)
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Posted by JayDee
on 2008-03-16 01:34:55
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I really like this, even if it is a little dark. It struck a chord with me, some of the sentiments ring true from past experiences.
You have a real talent, I'm glad I have discovered it.
Best wishes xxx :-)
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Posted by chebtastic1
on 2008-03-16 14:25:54
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Well this is a sad one for sure. Well done but sad.
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Posted by alleen
on 2008-03-20 03:16:11
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Wow stickman, this has a familiar ring to it (for me), it is very intense i love it honey x
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Posted by missmarie
on 2008-03-22 16:01:29
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What are you going to do with all your work, you must do something...do you have anything published? I bet you do!
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Posted by roe
on 2008-04-07 22:39:15
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