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Angel.

 

Fix your unwavering gaze
of black, stone eyes
over this marble framed bed
in which I lie.

Stand in stony mourning,
Shedding your tears of sand
in this endless night
of eternal, dreamless sleep.

Let us become as lovers
entranced in ritual yearning;
A kiss upon your cold lips
feels no different upon mine.

Time’s toll on you;
soft degradation, a trickling eclipse,
will make us one in dust,
our bed, this placid earth.




Posted by badlydrawnstickman on 2007-12-13 15:00:23 | Rating: | Views: 177


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Posted by
overthehillandfaraway
on 2007-12-13 15:31:51
 
OK Stickman - now it's time to go for the real thing. And by the way, the cooker goes tomorrow. I am not sad. No way..........I lie! Hope you're well. E
 
 

Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2007-12-13 16:44:57
 
Your Spiritual Love Prose...always leaves me enchanted.
Like I just came out of a dream or something.
I truly love it.
 
 

Posted by
SubTomato
on 2007-12-14 13:22:27
 
A depressingly great entry.
 
 

Posted by
Abstract
on 2007-12-16 12:21:05
 
Hey there stickman...nice to hear from you. Great poetry....
 
 

Posted by
brokenangel
on 2007-12-17 18:08:52
 
beautiful
 
 

Posted by
CavedogRob
on 2007-12-17 21:03:18
 
kool poem...
 
 

Posted by
harliee
on 2007-12-18 16:05:52
 
very nice stickman!
 
 

Posted by
wlamebull
on 2007-12-20 13:29:09
 
great stuff... as usual!
 
 

Posted by
trevorjohn
on 2007-12-20 13:31:12
 
You always make me think!
 
 

Posted by
Rajah1116
on 2007-12-21 21:04:02
 
Is this dedicated to the pic? Just curious if it was your inspiration.
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2007-12-26 05:58:41
 
Beautiful writing with a lonely topic, stickman.
 
 

Posted by
angel_devil
on 2007-12-28 15:03:21
 
i like it...a lot. ^_^
 
 

Posted by
missmarie
on 2007-12-29 09:33:25
 
wow BDS, thats beautiful xx
 
 


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