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I thought that the distance
Would make all the difference
But it hurt just the same
I wanted to hate you
But then I realized
I’m the one to blame
I thought that you loved me
And I thought that you cared
But I still fail to see
Why after all
That’s been said and done
You choose her over me

Posted by Wickedlovely826 on 2008-07-15 17:10:31 | Rating:

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Posted by FutileResistance on 2008-07-15 20:07:14


		awww
Posted by Angel_Crank on 2008-07-15 20:43:01


		Futile:I don't know what to say... Angel:I know it's sad.Sad but true.
Posted by Wickedlovely826 on 2008-07-15 21:04:42


		Me neither. As far as the poem as a piece of literature; it ROCKED! But all your poems are high caliber. As for the subject, ive sent you a mail. You probably already read it if youve commented this.
Posted by FutileResistance on 2008-07-16 04:04:37


		Very nice. I could imagine those exact words coming from my mouth about a situation I experienced in the past. Very good writing.
Posted by even_angels_fall on 2008-07-16 09:24:02


		Futile:I got your email.Im not really sure what to say to that either... even_angels_fall:Thanks for the comment.
Posted by Wickedlovely826 on 2008-07-16 10:28:41


		Weel you know what i'm going to say. Say what you feel.
Posted by FutileResistance on 2008-07-16 13:57:42


		Been there. Youve got a talent with being able to take tough subjects and turning them into beautiful works of writing.
Posted by smileforthecamera on 2008-07-18 17:23:18


		Thanks smile.I guess that is my specialty.
Posted by Wickedlovely826 on 2008-07-18 18:10:24


		Your talent is growing. This is very good work.
Posted by Faith on 2008-07-19 14:27:56


		Thanks Faith.I guess the worse things get for me the better my poetry gets.I think its worth it.
Posted by Wickedlovely826 on 2008-07-19 15:16:26


		It doesn't sound like your the one to blame here. It's sad but people will chose others over you in life. I guess its all about waiting for the one who will choose YOU.
Posted by x_sharpies_x on 2008-07-21 15:49:21