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Have you ever had that curtain
Pulled back to show the light.
Suddenly the shadow's in retreat
And the world's revealed, so bright
Have you ever stood there stunned
By all the life that you surrounds.
Filled with peace and joy,
Love of life in you abounds
Have you ever felt that pain
you've lived with all your life
take a leave of absence,
to cause you no more strife
Have you ever walked that line
Between sane and totally insane?
But now it's lost the power
to cause you so much pain
Have you ever watched the sun
As it peeks out of clouds so dark.
The halo that surrounds it
Ignites life's mighty spark
Have you ever felt such peace
that to your eyes it brings tears,
Filled with all the wonder
Of vanquishing your fears
Have you ever met an angel,
Sent by God when you're in need
To smash away the darkness,
Victory is guaranteed
Have you ever walked that line
Between sane and totally insane?
The angel strides before you,
lights the way towards the sane
Have you ever....
I have
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Posted by Tony51203 on 2008-06-21 08:48:38 | Rating: | Views: 159
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That's beautiful
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Posted by slowtolearn
on 2008-06-21 09:47:19
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Again, I just read Part 1, and I like Part 2 better, but both are beautifully written.
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Posted by slowtolearn
on 2008-06-21 10:14:28
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Thank you, I try
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Posted by Tony51203
on 2008-06-21 11:29:40
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it's the dichotomy of the manic depressive
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Posted by Tony51203
on 2008-06-21 13:48:41
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wait, where is part 1?
Part 2 should be published and shared with the world, it is so
beautiful
and
right on the money!
more poems please!
wow, Im so impressed
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Posted by roe
on 2008-06-21 20:33:40
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part 1 is way back some in my blogs, just called Have you ever, not part 1 because at the time I did not know there's be a part 2.
If I recall correctly you've read it because you left a comment there also.
Afraid I'm not much for publishing, this is as far as I go to share with the world.
but anyone else who thinks it's worthy can feel free to share it however they like. Consider it public domain.
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Posted by Tony51203
on 2008-06-21 20:46:54
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Wonderful.... and Yes I have.
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-06-22 12:44:14
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hey did you notice you are gathering quite a following?
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Posted by roe
on 2008-06-22 23:28:41
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I wouldn't call it a following just because I get a few commenters. Most of them are from you and STL.
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Posted by Tony51203
on 2008-06-23 00:35:40
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Not that I don't appreciate the comments, I do because it means someone's actually reading this. maybe it can help someone, that's my sincerest hope.
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Posted by Tony51203
on 2008-06-23 00:36:50
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