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 The Pain of Unrequited Love - POEM
The Pain of Unrequited Love

A small dark room, where i rest my troubled head,
Lying simply broken, wishing i were dead.

Troubles i have caused, feelings i have felt,
The aching in my chest, my heart begins to melt.

Taking a sharp breath, hoping it will end,
The pain i am feeling, forbid to ever mend.

I cry a sea of dreams from my watery eyes,
Lost in disappiontment, waiting for my demise.

Thinking for a moment, all that has been done,
Not believing for a second, of what i have become.

Walking through this room, head facing to the floor.
Tears flowing down, I cant take it any more.

Sick of the pain, tired of the lies,
Sick of wiping all these tears from my eyes.

Millions of people, around me as i roam,
Smiling and laughing, i feel so alone.

Falling apart, i look to the sky above,
~Whispering to myself in vein~
It's the pain of unrequited love.

Written by: Erin Kingston 11th October 2007

    Posted by TiaErin on 2007-12-20 11:29:28 | Rating: | Views: 155
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Either this was written during a time of great pain or you've somehow tapped into the mind of a forlorn and spurned lover. There's some very expressive imagery in there. Especially like the 'sea of dreams' line. Good work.
Posted by  hairytoad2005  on 2008-01-02 07:41:49 
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