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A Slight Change.

Good Girl

That girl.

She is a good girl.
But she’s been broken too many times.
You can see the pain in her eyes, but she never cries

Shoving her worries in a closet.
She paints her lies a pretty pink.

She pulls out a costume as she throws a problem in.
Then she takes out her make-up kit again.

Look at her woven wigs of troubled lies.
Deep and knotted

What a collection of masks.

So porcelain and fake.

There has always been a certain sadness in her eyes

And she has always been rather h a l l o w

There always was that crack in her smile
Like it was forced for too long,
Broken under pressure.

Posted by The_Trouble_With_Zippers on 2009-03-01 01:56:20 | Rating:

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That was good. I liked it :-)

Posted by TaintedinLove on 2009-03-01 02:02:10

Thank you so very much m'dear! And also for the friend request.

Posted by The_Trouble_With_... on 2009-03-01 02:06:08

Your comments always make me smile.
You bring wonders to the World my dear.
Thank You.

Posted by The_Trouble_With_... on 2009-03-01 14:44:35

This was good.

Posted by dancing_on_wings on 2009-03-02 01:39:12

I really liked that! You should post more. And go look at my latest blog, this reminds me of it.

Posted by kimisblogging on 2009-03-02 22:01:38

Well, not to sound like everyone else who commented but i relate to this too. But im sure lots do :)
Your a very good poet. I love your work. It has very intense feelings , in such short forms. Hmm. Id like to read more.
-BSC

Posted by BitterSweetConfusion on 2009-03-17 13:41:54