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i guess you can say this poem has a lot of symbolisim. i guess! just something that is a little piece of what i'm feeling. guess that's why i wrote it because i normally don't really write poems unless i'm feeling a little of it, or i know someone who is feeling it. hmmmm....well anyways! here you go if you wan to read it. you can sitll turn back!


a flower that smells
growing with inner beauty
opening up
letting itself be vulnerable

rain falling gently
continuously without a stop
waiting for something hopeful
the clouds slowly start to clear
the rain starts to stop
and there
in the distance
a rainbow appears
Posted by SympatheticStargazer on 2008-05-13 00:43:22 | Rating: n/a | Views: 64


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Posted by
brainstormer
on 2008-05-23 03:17:26
 
Well...I thought the title was hot:P But, the rest was kinda like a lil song for a pre-school show:P I can see it on a bar napkin though.

Obviously you are the pretty lil smiling flower and waiting to be rained on to become all you can be. To be nurtured and made happy.

The rain is like friends and/or parents offering nurturing/feeding. Expecting you to blossom. The rainbow is a smile waiting to happen.
 
 


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