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This is the story of life,
Defeat comes hiding the victory
My every wish comes through
This isn’t really necessary
But still the shadows of my dreams
They feel so real and true
Those eyes wet with tears
That is where I’ll finally settle
That heart that was betrayed in those helpless hours
It will find a home again
For in the shadow of sorrow
Lies a baby hope of euphoria
Where’s the good in playing another heart
Where’s the good in breaking another
What good is my castle built
On another’s broken soul
Better then to keep a broken shack
On your complete smile |
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Posted by Slash on 2008-06-12 03:53:40 | Rating: | Views: 96
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You are so FUCKING AMAZING at writing!!!!
Keep it coming :]
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-06-12 05:20:20
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well written, nice. I'm glad I stopped by ... Hi by the way! :)
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Posted by EasyToSay
on 2008-06-12 07:26:11
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i'm blushing. thank you eeerm! i've read youor stuff. coming from you, that means a lot.
Thanks E2S. i'm glad my words could make you glad. and hello to you too!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-12 09:47:28
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Lol no worries lol
Im not all that gd anyway lol
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-06-12 11:14:51
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very nice Slash, you seem to have a very good soul. Thanks for letting us in to see that :)
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-12 13:16:21
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modesty eeerm! thats always a good quality to have you know! kind of makes you twice as good at whatever you're being modest about...
yours was a kind comment Katydids. thank you. and i'm looking forward to your QOD!! rock it!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-12 13:47:50
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Wonderful wonderful....
as always!!!
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Posted by LostInTheMoment
on 2008-07-02 20:29:43
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