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Why don’t you breathe in the air,
Why are you so afraid to care,
About you, about me, about us tonight?
So just breathe in the air,
Don’t be afraid anymore…
You said you don’t feel it
You said you want to die
You said you don’t need it,
Said you don’t need to survive
You said you don’t want it anymore
You said you want all the pain gone
So stand here by me now
And listen to what I say
Why don’t you breathe in the air
Why don’t you see how much I care
Why don’t you let me whisper in your ear
Why don’t you let me show you everything
That’s been right in front of your eyes all this while
You said you have wings
To fly away from the things that harm you
Why don’t you spread them wide
So the world can see how beautiful they are?
You said you’d rather not feel
Than feel pain all along
But love isn’t far away,
Finding you didn’t take long
So breathe in the air,
And let yourself care,
About you, about me, about us…
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Posted by Slash on 2008-06-18 10:45:49 | Rating: | Views: 152
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.......i dont know what to say.
Slash, that was mind blowing.
Carry on writing dude.
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-06-18 11:01:57
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thanks man...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-18 11:30:51
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Good stuff!
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-06-18 11:32:53
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very nice slash, your love is powerful and that is shown in your words.
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-18 11:33:49
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thank you anotherdaze and molly! your words mean a lot...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-18 12:14:23
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this was for someone very special. it came very raw and in the moment...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-18 12:16:06
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ooh, ur girl know how good u r?? she needs to read this, like, now. this is great man, i love it. the chorus is best, but its all grrrreat!!! like kellogs! >peace
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-18 13:19:38
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wow. im speechless truly i am. ur a kick ass writer u know that? wow.
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Posted by xmidnightxwingsx
on 2008-06-18 16:47:14
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thanks nova and hunt! all this praise, i feel is undeserved. it might go to my head... :P naw, i'll be satisfied if the one i wrote it for reads it and goes home with a smile on her face...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-19 01:34:20
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raw and in the moment, the very best writing comes at exactly that time....I hope to see more of your moments because I enjoy them thoroughly and if she's not smiling I am....if that helps at all LMAO :)
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-19 01:37:50
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yes molly, to think that you can take a smile away from my words, that satisfies my purpose and gladdens my heart.
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-19 03:20:03
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wow u r good!!!!!
how long u been writing?
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Posted by ukgirl
on 2008-06-20 12:53:14
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thanks ukgirl! been writing on and off for about two years. got into writing most of this stuff when i joined thoughts. about 4 months ago.
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-20 16:04:25
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this is simply amazing. . .it took my breath away really. it's that beautifully written.
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Posted by toxicmeg09
on 2008-06-22 00:49:37
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thanks meg! your words are really encouraging! thank you...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-22 03:30:34
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i wish i could take the pain away :(
i feel so helpless
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-06-22 10:24:25
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just by being here with me angel, u do take the pain away... don't you know that?
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-22 11:50:10
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Thnx for the comment. The only thing more mindblowing is a shotgun.
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Posted by TheLoneShadow
on 2008-06-23 06:14:26
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I identify. It sounds like something would right about me because I am so skidish about relationships. It's cool though.
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Posted by Faith
on 2008-06-24 16:20:54
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im very touched. beyond anything u can imagine. you are very special.
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-06-25 05:07:21
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now ur makin me sound like a retarded person! speacial?! :P
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-25 09:15:55
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well, u keep spellin special wrong and people might start to think that sweetie, hahaha! keep writing!!!
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Posted by Hunterrrrxisxamazing
on 2008-06-26 12:43:39
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i feel like a stalker. i read all of these comments *whispers* dont tell anyone. *looks around* hahaha. i still love it! even better with the music.
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Posted by xmidnightxwingsx
on 2008-06-27 23:12:56
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that was great i loved it...i don't know what else to say...
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Posted by lilD16
on 2008-07-16 14:45:47
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What an awesome piece of writing! Wonderful.
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Posted by HardThinker
on 2008-08-15 05:51:26
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wow...just wow. i don't know what else to say...
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Posted by cutipi
on 2008-08-17 15:54:50
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