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4 days of loving you
Before an eternity without you
But my heart stays where it was
It beats still those familiar beats
And its been eons now that I remember us again.
I’ve been lost in my own breath
Because I’ve forgotten even your shadow
I’ve lived too long searching for something
And all the while, your love is what I did forget
And I’ve been intertwined in this world,
The pity that my heart gave me after
4 days of loving you
Before an eternity alone
Every helpless moment in this life
Seeks only your eyes, asks only for your touch
And every path this heart did tread on
Never reached a destination, never brought it love
Now I hide myself while I walk those streets,
Holding my heart back after
4 days of loving you
Before an eternity alone
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Posted by Slash on 2008-06-11 11:48:49 | Rating: | Views: 106
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powerful and great. 5 stars and nice to meet you slash.
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Posted by Katydids_and_daisies
on 2008-06-11 12:08:18
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thanks you! the pleasure is all mine...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-11 12:09:20
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*thank*
i hate it when i make spelling errors!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-11 12:58:53
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Omg! Awsome post!
I wish my posts were that great! Just goes to show your way better at blogging than I am!
You won't have an eternity alone,don't hold you heart back just keep looking for your girl she'
s out there just you wait! When she comes you won't be expecting it!
-Tay
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Posted by Supporttheflocktw...
on 2008-06-11 16:39:48
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this is amazingly deep.
i simply love it.
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Posted by toxicmeg09
on 2008-06-11 18:33:57
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thanks Tay! i just wrote what i felt. and you do the same in your blogs. don't disredit youorself. we're all here just to share our deepest emotions. and doing that makes you an excellent blogger! i check up on your blogs all the time!
and thanks Meg. i really appreciate the comment.
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-11 23:44:58
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I luv it! Keep expressing ur emotions (did that just sound like a pep talker?) but anyways, it rocked. You'll find her. All you have to do is wait for the one. The one where u turn to ur friends and say "thats her." im just assuming its a girl, btw...hehe
- Nova
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THis is me. I'd say im sorry to disappoint you, but im not.
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Posted by xmidnightxwingsx
on 2008-06-12 01:51:43
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you assume correct nova. and thanks for the compliment. i'll keep trying to pen those thoughts down...
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-12 03:05:49
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This is great!
Such a simple idea.
Nice one :)
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-06-12 03:11:58
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thanks eeerm!
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Posted by Slash
on 2008-06-12 03:34:03
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u've got talent, slash..amazing talent with words. im sorry that ur hurting...i hope the pain goes away. Im confident ull find the one for you...she wasnt the one although it seems right now like she was. ull find her :)
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-06-22 10:13:27
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