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 Listen...

 

Listen still your mind.
I want you to hear the beat of my heart.

All the world walks past me as I gaze into oblivion,and think on the deepest sympathies, for all the joyous moments lost.
Still my heart beats.

I feel it brake I swear the pain should make the cruelty of my anguish dissipate into vapor, stop the relentless rhythm in my chest let it still upon deaths pillow.

I can touch the pulse and feel it there yet my mind tells me it has no place.
I forgive it not for causing my eyes to weep so many times.

My heart is a tool of my despair, and it beats on.
How many times I have cried so hard I could barley breath my heart pulls at my soul and stops it from leaving ..ties knots to my mortal existence like chains to a slave.

Listen still your mind.

This heart could beat for you
Torn into shreds
yet it has
drawn
strength
from
its
anguish
and
aches of life still hoping
I cant stop its favor of love...though I try!.

I argue with its reasoning I want no part of its plans, My soul screams in violent tones of red painted sorrow 
"Please stop"
It cant...
It loves...
So it carries on its relentless and pitiful quest to find a token unforesaking its damage to ware as a shield from what is undeniable to my soul.....Pain.

I talk to my heart "shhhhhh quite now be silent no more Love less let pain take you my whole life" it falls upon stone that listens not to reason.
So it beats and waits and I sigh for its imperfections...
My soul relinquishes hope and drains itself upon years of strife and bitter wet tears.

In the end my soul is damp from the years lost and salt upon my cheeks...

My soul stands looking at my mortal gift deceased and the heart that never gave up, my soul now understands and pours into it the torment of hopes and dreams shattered and my heart at last finds peace for my souls love is true....and it sleeps.

Listen there is now silence.



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    Posted by sarafeline on 2009-09-24 13:12:31 | Rating: | Views: 194
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beautifull post sara
and good to see you blogging again friend
xoxo (((hugs)))
regards fraglerock
Posted by  fraglerock  on 2009-09-24 13:15:51 
  
Thankyou Frank dear :)
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-24 13:18:12 
  
speechlesss........the music brings tears to my eyes....
Posted by  monicaspeaks  on 2009-09-24 13:17:19 
  
Awe :)..((Hugs))
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-24 13:18:30 
  
that was really beautiful
Posted by  puck  on 2009-09-24 13:28:20 
  
Thankyou BRO :)
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-24 18:25:06 
  
that was amazing! wish I could write like that =)
Posted by  Dragon_Raid  on 2009-09-24 13:56:06 
  
Awe thankyou so much truly :)
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-24 18:25:34 
  
I was blown away by this post. Your reference to joyous moments lost touched me. My reading of this post took me back in time to just a few months ago when I suffered from the internal struggle of the rational mind and the broken heart.

Sarah - very beautiful, touching, sad, and I too listen now and only hear silence.
Posted by  Waynesview  on 2009-09-24 22:46:05 
  
awe thankyou Wayne I hope your heart is mending and one day is whole once more :)...
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-25 05:03:46 
  
Love the post and the music! :)

*Dee*
Posted by  DeeinFL  on 2009-09-24 22:52:05 
  
:D..Thankyou so muchio :).
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-25 05:04:15 
  
Too intense after a bottle of wine, just the feelings got through my muddled brain.
Posted by  RRoe  on 2009-09-25 20:24:24 
  
Awe Hugs :)))
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-26 07:49:05 
  
wow your writing is so beautiful, and that was so intense.
well written
Posted by  sheerheartattack17  on 2009-09-26 04:46:28 
  
Thankyou SH17 :))) Appriciate the time you took to read this :).
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-26 07:49:58 
  
beautifully written. but, I'm gonna pass on some advice I heard on the radio in the late 80's.

"Be Happy!" ~ Bobby McFerrin
Posted by  Munkyman  on 2009-09-29 12:37:30 
  
LOL :D.
Posted by  sarafeline  on 2009-09-29 14:56:07 
  
Beautifully said and I love the music.


...dani
Posted by  WalkinOnSunshine  on 2009-09-29 15:04:30 
  
Thankyou dani :D.x.
Posted by  Crimson_Read  on 2009-10-01 14:14:44 
  
I feel every word of that.
Posted by  brokenprincess  on 2009-09-30 23:29:41 
  
awe then I must throw up my arms run at you and (((Hug))
Posted by  Crimson_Read  on 2009-10-01 14:15:28 
  
(((HUG))) right back. this music just make me want to grab a kleenex and let it all out...ok better just hand me the box hehe .. I mean *sniff*
Posted by  brokenprincess  on 2009-10-06 21:29:03 
  
oh my goodness, so beautiful.. love your posts:)
hugs pianogirl
Posted by  pianogirl  on 2009-10-08 15:37:40 
  
The sad violin really set the mood. The violin is my favorite instrument even though I've never even touched one. It's a sad instrument and the combination of the music and the brilliant poem was magificent. Great job.
Posted by  balltown_chick  on 2009-10-11 09:47:08 
  
Very romantic post. Where did you get this pictures? Did you do them?
Posted by  Popuas  on 2009-10-24 04:08:03 
  
Where are you, hope you are okay.

Roe
Posted by  RRoe  on 2009-11-16 21:22:11 
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