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The Victory of Defeat


The Lecture:

You poor old tortured heart,
you’ve went and done it again.
You’ve opened up and let someone in.
That wasn’t very smart.
Why not listen to me?
I can make your life easy.
I’m the one who picks up the pieces
when you try to break free.
Everything is logical.
People are all the same.
This love you want is all just a game.
Its pursuit is dismal.

The Defense:

Sometimes you might be right.
I do tend to rush in,
but if I feel chemistry with them
I feel we’re at our height.
What would you have us do?
Refrain from interactions,
take up hobbies, or some distractions?
You must need some love too.
I’m bringing life to you.
Our lovers were not pretend,
and lost loves tops no love in the end.
I believe this…I do.
Posted by Pauligan on 2008-01-23 20:56:35 | Rating: | Views: 125


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Posted by
bubblydi
on 2008-01-24 04:47:47
 
Beautiful poem paul.
I can really hear you arguing with your heart.
I do that all the time.
Bless you hun, you deserve all the happiness in the world.
You are one in a million.xx
 
 

Posted by
scotslad60
on 2008-01-24 10:45:56
 
Excellent poem Paul. I used to like the Jim Reeves sing, "Dear Heart". This kinda reminds me of that lol
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-24 17:38:31
 
Thanks Lovely Di, you always brighten my day.
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-24 17:39:22
 
Thanks Jim, I'll have to look that song up and give it a listen.
 
 

Posted by
Forgetmeknot
on 2008-01-24 18:03:46
 
This is a great poem Paul, I really enjoyed it.
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-24 18:16:37
 
Thank you D., I always enjoy your visits.
 
 

Posted by
Wayne
on 2008-01-27 08:57:14
 
where'd the damn words go again...nice as usual Paul..
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-27 09:17:05
 
Thanks Wayne, your my buddy.
 
 

Posted by
DifficultSoul
on 2008-01-28 19:06:32
 
Victory is the sweetest reward Paul.
 
 

Posted by
roe
on 2008-01-28 23:01:52
 
this was really thought filled, youre good, I enjoy everything you have to say
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-29 01:41:52
 
I guess I've always thought love is the sweetest reward, LftH, but that is what I'm talking about here.
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-01-29 01:43:38
 
Thanks roe, you are a sweetie to say that. You're pretty good yourself and I think a lot of people would agree with me on that one.
 
 

Posted by
ReD_MooN
on 2008-02-05 18:35:55
 
I really liked it.
Great poem.
I think it's so true too. When people fall in love, we tend to argue with ouselves.
The problem is that both our brain and our hearts have undeniably good cases.
Deffinately something to think on!
Thanks
 
 

Posted by
trevorjohn
on 2008-02-19 18:03:18
 
I must ask.....
What is LftH?
Or is it a secret?
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-02-19 21:56:02
 
Thanks Moon, I usually let my heart lead me but sometimes my mind has to step in and save the day.
 
 

Posted by
Pauligan
on 2008-02-19 21:57:37
 
It's no secret, TJ. LftH is my Indian name for DS...Love from the Heart. I don't think she could be described any better than that.
 
 


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