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i would like to preface this by saying that i wrote in the 8th grade, and i still remember every word. could i change some things: yes. but for nostalgia's sake, i will not touch it.
i once knew a boy with eyes like the moon
he slept with the stars, but loved a girl named June
June, she was beautiful, she had wings for hair
her skin, it was freckled, milky, and fair
but i love the boy with the moons in his eyes
he is my possession, he is my prize
but somehow i know, that i cannot compete
with someone who is so sickeningly sweet
so i'll stay here on earth, while above me they hover
and i'll think with a sigh, of my celestial lover.
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Posted by NutintheSky on 2007-10-18 21:55:44 | Rating: | Views: 105
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Beautiful imagery! I think it should definitely be left as is.
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Posted by aurorajulialis
on 2007-10-18 22:12:44
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hi nut!
i like it too!
it's sweet and simple - and i think that sweet and simple are rare things these days...
:o)
cheers!
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Posted by badlydrawnstickman
on 2007-10-19 06:47:10
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