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T h a n k Y o u
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I w a n t e d to dedicate this short piece to E v e r y H e a r t that has
L o v e d Me
Helped Me
Devoted their t i m e to Me
Cared for Me
S t ru g g l e d for and against Me
Lost their sleves w i t h Me
Hated ME
R e s p e c t e d ME
And
Kept ME s a f e
Thank you to those that have
Pushed Me
S t r e n g t h e n Me
Worshipped Me
I g n o r e d Me
Abused Me
Broke M e!
And
To t h o s e that Have F a l l e n T o M e
To the ones
I h a v e loved
Lost
And kept in my life
To the good
The bad and
The ugly
To e v e r y t h i n g I am
And I am GOING to become
To the new the old
The present the past
And my f u t u r e
To those I do know
And to those souls I have yet to meet
To everyone that will shape me
T h a n k y o u
B e c a u s e I love who I am becoming
Who I have g r o w n to become
And WHO I will G R O W into.
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Posted by MissBB on 2008-05-28 03:34:16 | Rating: | Views: 131
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I loved the look of this post...very funky :) You are very thankful at this moment :)
Very "good looking" post :D
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Posted by angelwings
on 2008-05-28 04:30:01
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Angelwings - thanks hun =]!!!
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-28 05:19:20
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This is amazing!! I loved everything about it. Everything from the structure to the ending(my absolute fav part) :]
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Posted by smileforthecamera
on 2008-05-28 12:51:55
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This is pretty cool.
Quite an individual idea to be honest.
Thank you to those that shaped me.
Such a great message.
Keep up the good work darling :)
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Posted by eeerm
on 2008-05-28 15:17:09
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awesome post. even the style in which it was wrote is great expression!
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Posted by anotherdaze
on 2008-05-28 15:54:47
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this is great! i wrote something similar to this a couple of years ago, and it's so true isnt it? i love it, good post hun!
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Posted by pixierose
on 2008-05-28 20:02:27
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smileforthecamera-
thankies.. its something different i tried =]
something i really want to express to everyone i knew...
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-30 10:18:15
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eeerm as always i love reading your comments.. thanks for taking the time to read this. im really so happy people are enjoying this..
its something so powerful i wanted to express but in its most simplistic form =]
BB
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-30 10:20:30
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anotherdaze ===
thank yoohs for your comments i love that you love this...
take care
BB
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-30 10:21:45
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pixierose... hi darl
if you ever want to put that piece up again.. or if you have it up already id love to read it...
and its true to everyword.. thats what i feel is so captivating about it.. becuase it doesnt just express to myself but to everyone that reads it that can define it in their own way.
BB
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Posted by MissBB
on 2008-05-30 10:23:29
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MissBB,
I stumbled upon this poem and found it quite raw and full of truths.
The presentation of words threw me a bit, but the content can't be hidden by the changing fonts.
Well done! A real life poem stated with honesty and nothing held back.
Grace and Peace to you!
Greg
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Posted by Grateful1
on 2008-06-08 18:09:03
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