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 Too Deep
I'm in too deep
But that doesn't matter
They think i'm asleep
They wouldn't mind
If I wasn't around
I try to be kind
But it just seems like i'm bound
To this bed in which I pretend my slumber
I hear a sigh
From the doorway
I know you don't really care
You pretend just as I
I know you all wish I would go away
But i'm in too deep
Falling deeper into an awake sleep
Dreams that won't disapear when I wake
In too deep
Too deep in this
I hear the muffled sound of you walking away
I want to call out to you
But the words stick in my throat
I wait until the only sound is my unsteadt breathing
Then the tears run down my face
Why are we pretending
This civil bullshit is tearing me apart
Why can't you leave me alone
Or at least give me a way to end it
is pain and suffering
Because
I'm in way
Too deep
    Posted by Mienai on 2008-08-20 23:54:15 | Rating: | Views: 40
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wow, i feel like i can relate to this so much, really well done. I hope you can pull yourself out of this; i'm sure that you are strong, and take pride in that your writing has gone noticed. Very well done, hope all works out well.
Posted by  my0take0by0LE  on 2008-08-21 00:15:18 
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Mienai
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