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 Poetry is my savior

Right now i'm in that poetic and if I don't write on something I'll write on myself with a blade.Although I do feel a little better.Sooo I figure I'll write some more poetry.Here we go.Another one to Darren btw,
I keep telling myself
That i'm over you
But the cuts
Tell me it's not true
And I when I start
To think of you
My heart starts to speed up
Just like before
Just like when you used to
Hold me close in my bed
And tell me how green my eyes are
Only now it hurts
The thumping is like a pounding
Of a hammer inside my chest
I stare at my empty doorway
As if I can make you appear
By my willpower
But as the minutes tick by
My eyes stray
Knowing nothing will appear
I know you aren't here
A tear rolls down my cheek
Quick and gone as fast as it came
Just like you
 

    Posted by Mienai on 2008-08-04 20:16:53 | Rating: | Views: 50
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hmm. your an amazing writer. you speak with sorrow and lots of pain. but still from the heart. i find myself smiling when i read your blogs, not out of laughter but out of hope. no one is alone in this world. Maybe you just need to let go and look around. or maybe i should take my own advise huh.
but you really are an AMAZING writer. <33
Posted by  SharonNicole08  on 2008-08-04 21:49:04 
  
Wow your a great writer! Your poem do have a lot of emotion and the word choices for each stanza... excellent job.:)
Posted by  tabbycat911  on 2008-08-08 00:15:47 
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Mienai
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