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 Kill Me

Kill me rougher
Kill me longer
Kill me slower
Kill me softer
You kill me
Inside
You kill me
On the outside
You hurt me
More I thought possible
I tried to hide
And be subtle
But the pain broke through
And showed itself to you
So you
Killed me rougher
Killed me longer
Killed me slower
Killed me softer
Why did you say you cared
If you really never did?
Why did you hang around
Only to bring me down?
You should of left before I exploaded
But you just had to
Kill me some more
 

    Posted by Mienai on 2008-08-19 22:41:18 | Rating: | Views: 46
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i really like this poem and can relate with how other people can make you feel..good writing keep it up
Posted by  xscarstellstoriesx  on 2008-08-19 22:47:51 
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Mienai
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