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 Bent until I broke
Poem for twinkie.

All I ever did was for you
Everything I tried to be
Was what you wanted
And you were such a friend
The kind that shoved me aside
You just kept making me bend
How can you be suprised that I broke
Someone can only bend so far
Someone can only take so much
Before they have to say stop
I screamed it
You just kept making me bend
When I broke a peice of me cut you
You act as if I did this all on purpose
You act the weak one
You cry at their feet with fake blood
Showing me no love
Even though you left saying I love you
Words that pierce my heart
Yeah I know I hurt you
But how could you possibly complain
You bent me until I broke
Slowly making me hate you
Every move you made
To push me farther over the edge
That I griped so tightly
You broke my fingers
And I fell
With false words the would pull me close
Making the blow twice as hard
But you cry and bleed at their feet
Making them hate me
You and I know the truth
But how could you possibly complain
You bent me till I broke
    Posted by Mienai on 2008-08-13 18:56:12 | Rating: | Views: 35
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This is really good, your words are full of emotion, and so general yet specific, i can really relate.

Wonderfully done, i really enjoyed reading your poem, keep them coming!
Posted by  my0take0by0LE  on 2008-08-13 18:59:47 
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